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04/28/2026 14:58h
The asking was askance.
And the tell all told.
So then, in tandem,
Anathema, and anthem.
The truth was on hold,
Seeking too tasking.
And the wool was pulled
Over as cover.
No eyes were kept peeled.
My iris I missed
The truth, now mistrust
All things seen, and this
Distrust, the sounded distress signal
Called and called and culled from your damsel.
04/28/2026 14:58h
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To Pope’s Impromptu
Title and Epigraph
This poem is also known by a longer title: "To Mr. Pope In answer to a coppy of verses occasion'd by a little dispute upon four lines in the Rape of the Lock"
Finch is responding to these four lines from Pope's
The Rape of the Lock
(first published 1712, finished 1717):
Parent of vapors and of female wit,
Who give the hysteric or poetic fit,
On various tempers act by various ways,
Make some take physic, other scribble plays; (Canto 4, lines 59-62)
Alexander Pope's poem "Impromptu, To Lady Winchelsea Occasion'd by Four Satyrical Verses on Women-Wits, in The Rape of the Lock":
In vain you boast Poetic Names of yore,
And cite those Sapphos we admire no more:
Fate doom'd the Fall of ev'ry Female Wit;
But doom'd it then when first Ardelia writ.
Of all Examples by the World confess'd,
I knew Ardelia could not quote the best;
Who, like her Mistress on Britannia's Throne;
Fights and subdues in Quarrels not her own.
To write their Praise you but in vain essay;
Ev'n while you write, you take that Praise away:
Light to the Stars the Sun does thus restore,
But shines himself till they are seen no more.
"Ardelia" is Finch's pen-name. The poem was written around 1714, and published in Bayle's
Dictionary
in 1741.
Pope’s and Finch’s poem share the words "fate" and "world," and Pope's use of "admire" is echoed in Finch's use of "admiration."
Disarmed with so genteel an air,
The contest I give o’er;
Yet, Alexander, have a care,
And
shock
shock
Echoes the Shock from Pope's The Rape of the Lock where the word suggests a military campaign: "Or whether Heaven has doomed that Shock must fall. /. . . / Ariel himself shall be the guard of Shock." (Canto 2, lines 110, 116), and in Belinda's words from Canto 4, line 164: ". . . Shock was most unkind!"
the sex
no more
no more
Finch echoes Pope's use of “no more” in "Impromptu": “In vain you boast Poetic Names of yore, / And cite those Sapphos we admire no more:“ and “Light to the Stars the Sun does thus restore, / But shines himself till they are seen no more.”
.
We rule the world our life’s whole race,
Men but assume that right;
First slaves to ev’ry tempting face
First slaves to ev’ry tempting face
Compare Pope's lines from The Rape of the Lock: "If to her share some female errors fall, / Look on her face, and you'll forget 'em all." (Canto 2, lines 17-18)
,
Then martyrs to our spite.
You of one
Orpheus
Orpheus . . . Hebrus . . . flood
From Greek mythology: Orpheus was a legendary poet who could tame wild animals with his lute playing. He was allowed to lead his wife Eurydice out of Hades, provided he not look back as she followed him. Disobeying this command, he lost her forever. Afterward, lamenting his loss and disregarding the Thracian Maenads (women who followed Bacchus) these women tore him apart and threw his head into the Hebrus river. John Milton presents a brief account of Orpheus in Lycidas(1638), lines 58-63, which includes the river Hebrus: "His goary visage down the stream was sent, / Down the swift Hebrus to the Lesbian shore" (lines 62-63).
sure have read,
Who would like you have
writ
writ . . . wit
Finch reverses the end rhyme of lines 3 and 4 from Pope's "Impromptu": “Fate doom'd the Fall of ev'ry Female Wit; / But doom'd it then when first Ardelia writ.”
Had he in London town been bred,
And polished too his
wit
writ . . . wit
Finch reverses the end rhyme of lines 3 and 4 from Pope's "Impromptu": “Fate doom'd the Fall of ev'ry Female Wit; / But doom'd it then when first Ardelia writ.”
;
But he poor soul thought all was well,
And great should be his fame,
When he had left his wife in hell,
And birds and beasts could tame.
Yet venturing then with scoffing rhymes
The women to incense,
Resenting heroines of those times
Soon punished his offense.
And as the
Hebrus
Orpheus . . . Hebrus . . . flood
From Greek mythology: Orpheus was a legendary poet who could tame wild animals with his lute playing. He was allowed to lead his wife Eurydice out of Hades, provided he not look back as she followed him. Disobeying this command, he lost her forever. Afterward, lamenting his loss and disregarding the Thracian Maenads (women who followed Bacchus) these women tore him apart and threw his head into the Hebrus river. John Milton presents a brief account of Orpheus in Lycidas(1638), lines 58-63, which includes the river Hebrus: "His goary visage down the stream was sent, / Down the swift Hebrus to the Lesbian shore" (lines 62-63).
rolled his skull,
And harp besmeared with blood,
They clashing as the waves grew full,
Still harmonized the
flood
Orpheus . . . Hebrus . . . flood
From Greek mythology: Orpheus was a legendary poet who could tame wild animals with his lute playing. He was allowed to lead his wife Eurydice out of Hades, provided he not look back as she followed him. Disobeying this command, he lost her forever. Afterward, lamenting his loss and disregarding the Thracian Maenads (women who followed Bacchus) these women tore him apart and threw his head into the Hebrus river. John Milton presents a brief account of Orpheus in Lycidas(1638), lines 58-63, which includes the river Hebrus: "His goary visage down the stream was sent, / Down the swift Hebrus to the Lesbian shore" (lines 62-63).
.
But you our follies gently treat,
And spin so fine the thread,
You need not fear his awkward fate,
The lock won’t cost the head
The lock won’t cost the head
Refers to Pope's The Rape of the Lock, while also playing on "maidenhead": that is, virginity.
.
Our
admiration
admiration
Echoes Pope's "admire" from his "Impromptu": In vain you . . . / . . . cite those Sapphos we admire no more”
you command
For all that’s gone before;
What next we look for at your hand
Can only raise it more.
Yet sooth the ladies I advise
(As me too pride has wrought)
We’re born to wit, but to be wise
By admonitions taught.
04/28/2026 14:58h
to Helena Shire
The Makers did not make
The muddy winter hardening to privation,
Or cholera in the keep, or frost’s long ache
Afflicting every mortal nation
From lord to villagers in their fading dyes
—Those who like oxen strained
On stony clearings of the ground
From church to sties.
They sought an utterance,
Or sunshine soluble in institution,
An orthodoxy justified, at once
The dream and dreamer warmed in fusion,
As in the great Rose Window, pieced from duty,
Where through Christ’s crimson, sun
Shines on your clothes till they take on
Value and beauty.
But carved on a high beam
Far in the vault from the official version
Gape gnarled unChristian heads out of whom stream
Long stems of contrary assertion,
Shaped leaf ridging their scalps in place of hair.
Their origins lost to sight,
As they are too, cast out from light.
They should despair.
What stays for its own sake,
Occulted in the dark, may slip an ending,
Recalcitrant, and strengthened by the ache
Of winter not for the transcending.
Ice and snow pile the gables of the roof
Within whose shade they hold,
Intimate with its slaty cold,
To Christ aloof.
04/28/2026 14:58h
First, are you our sort of a person?
Do you wear
A glass eye, false teeth or a crutch,
A brace or a hook,
Rubber breasts or a rubber crotch,
Stitches to show something's missing? No, no? Then
How can we give you a thing?
Stop crying.
Open your hand.
Empty? Empty. Here is a hand
To fill it and willing
To bring teacups and roll away headaches
And do whatever you tell it.
Will you marry it?
It is guaranteed
To thumb shut your eyes at the end
And dissolve of sorrow.
We make new stock from the salt.
I notice you are stark naked.
How about this suit——
Black and stiff, but not a bad fit.
Will you marry it?
It is waterproof, shatterproof, proof
Against fire and bombs through the roof.
Believe me, they'll bury you in it.
Now your head, excuse me, is empty.
I have the ticket for that.
Come here, sweetie, out of the closet.
Well, what do you think of that?
Naked as paper to start
But in twenty-five years she'll be silver,
In fifty, gold.
A living doll, everywhere you look.
It can sew, it can cook,
It can talk, talk, talk.
It works, there is nothing wrong with it.
You have a hole, it's a poultice.
You have an eye, it's an image.
My boy, it's your last resort.
Will you marry it, marry it, marry it.
04/28/2026 14:58h
I like when the form is kind of stuck-up
even though I’ve got a Southern accent and my place
looks like a graduate student’s. 1. I enjoy
high art but realism swamps me.
2. The material world swamps me.
3. I came to understand
the forms of realism,
the aesthetic phenomenon.
4. You take a random person
from daily life.
5. You take their dependence
on their historical circumstances.
6. You make them
the subject.
7. You see, they operate
the modern.
Things happen ... minutes, hours, days.
The order of life
coming from life itself.
Back to life /
Back to reality (like Soul II Soul).
It is sublime
and grotesque.
8. They make rich forms.
Something steady.
Less manic.
Something real
like a bell
inside the Golden Seahorse Gift Shop.
Don’t take me
on that ride.
I don’t want
to go down.
9. To what degree
are the subjects
taken seriously?
They naturally swim
beneath the icy sheets
and find breathing holes.
They may remember
their arctic homes.
They are one of the park’s
most sociable creatures. I said
enter the water with them.
Graceful imitation of strange
palms and seaflowers. A seaflower
of a thousand colors, aquarium
pigmented. It is my violent
passion for seaflowers, Molly.
I want the entire
underwater palace
built of roaring seaflowers!
Beluga! Beluga! Wither and mow.
The child’s song.
Emerald kayak
and the femme fatale
who sleeps in it, Victorian,
long, frothy hair
and the death drive,
flesh like the statement, “I lost a friend
in the sea garden.”
The notes, staccato, vortex,
paradisiacal, gold bell in a coffin
just in case I wake up. And the way
darkness tunnels
inside a car on its way
to its pinpoint destination.
No one tells you
the moon’s going
to end up like this.
No one. So you just move towards it.
That’s all the moon
ever was. Ding. Ding.
04/28/2026 14:58h
I’m a tranquilizer.
I’m effective at home.
I work in the office.
I can take exams
on the witness stand.
I mend broken cups with care.
All you have to do is take me,
let me melt beneath your tongue,
just gulp me
with a glass of water.
I know how to handle misfortune,
how to take bad news.
I can minimize injustice,
lighten up God’s absence,
or pick the widow’s veil that suits your face.
What are you waiting for—
have faith in my chemical compassion.
You’re still a young man/woman.
It’s not too late to learn how to unwind.
Who said
you have to take it on the chin?
Let me have your abyss.
I’ll cushion it with sleep.
You’ll thank me for giving you
four paws to fall on.
Sell me your soul.
There are no other takers.
There is no other devil anymore.
04/28/2026 14:58h
When you come, as you soon must, to the streets of our city,
Mad-eyed from stating the obvious,
Not proclaiming our fall but begging us
In God’s name to have self-pity,
Spare us all word of the weapons, their force and range,
The long numbers that rocket the mind;
Our slow, unreckoning hearts will be left behind,
Unable to fear what is too strange.
Nor shall you scare us with talk of the death of the race.
How should we dream of this place without us?—
The sun mere fire, the leaves untroubled about us,
A stone look on the stone’s face?
Speak of the world’s own change. Though we cannot conceive
Of an undreamt thing, we know to our cost
How the dreamt cloud crumbles, the vines are blackened by frost,
How the view alters. We could believe,
If you told us so, that the white-tailed deer will slip
Into perfect shade, grown perfectly shy,
The lark avoid the reaches of our eye,
The jack-pine lose its knuckled grip
On the cold ledge, and every torrent burn
As Xanthus once, its gliding trout
Stunned in a twinkling. What should we be without
The dolphin’s arc, the dove’s return,
These things in which we have seen ourselves and spoken?
Ask us, prophet, how we shall call
Our natures forth when that live tongue is all
Dispelled, that glass obscured or broken
In which we have said the rose of our love and the clean
Horse of our courage, in which beheld
The singing locust of the soul unshelled,
And all we mean or wish to mean.
Ask us, ask us whether with the worldless rose
Our hearts shall fail us; come demanding
Whether there shall be lofty or long standing
When the bronze annals of the oak-tree close.
04/28/2026 14:58h
The age demanded that we sing
And cut away our tongue.
The age demanded that we flow
And hammered in the bung.
The age demanded that we dance
And jammed us into iron pants.
And in the end the age was handed
The sort of shit that it demanded.
04/28/2026 14:58h
Dear Commissioner
here are my directive accounts
of genitals and cash
now bring me your goods
We don't live among fowlers
Not all poisonous juices are burning
or bitter nor is everything now
which is burning and bitter poisonous
Air is removed from the workspace
and dispersed into the multiverse
It's very strict metadata
You get echoes and dropouts
For the most part
Juliet is gaseous now
as a caucasian she gets it
on the head and face and I move
from hypocrisy to cynicism
Cristal all over the face and neck
concrete and glinting
audible light on jumbotron
marmalade for miles
That good wood kept calling my name
Behavior meet Behavior, Behavior
meat all the social organs
04/28/2026 14:58h
1
Those who hear the train they had better worry worry
those who hear they had better worry worry.
2
No disgrace to worry to have the worried life blues
might do some good to be worried in the hour of our need.
3
Run run run away going to run run run away
there are those who think they’re going to run away.
4
To hear and to be facing and to be facing what is heard
to hear and to be face to face with what is heard.
5
Run run run away they’re going to run run run away
there are those who think they’re going to run away from the train.
6
Fort built to protect the community from desert raiders
community thought to protect itself from raiders.
7
Those who hear the train they had better worry worry
better worry worry about a gift of tears.
8
Those who are gathered in the fort had better learn
they had better learn how to cure their wounds.
9
The train with its poison and its tongue
the lurking train with its poison and its tongue.
10
Those who are gathered better learn to be insensitive
learn how to put on a show of being insensitive.
11
Danger of its poison and of its tongue
danger of its poison and of its tongue against our teeth.
12
Had better break the habit the habit of prayer
better let the jokes come back to us when we’re at prayer.
13
What really kills me is standing in the need of prayer
standing in a gathering in the need of prayer.
14
Don’t if we don’t if we don’t break the habit
we will be made to climb all the steps of the ladder.
15
Brood over someone else’s dream: three-story red tower
beneath the tower the train is always departing.
16
Danger of its tongue for those gathered like a group
gathered like a group of all virgins with their downcast eyes.
17
There is this problem with cutting off the prayer hand
there is this problem with the other hand.
18
How insensitive is how those who hear better be
how insensitive how unmoved and cold they had better be.
19
You can call him you can call him up and ask him
if we had only asked for “Sleep Walk by Santo & Johnny.
20
Red tower green sky three-story tower against green sky
beneath the tower the train is always departing.
21
Don’t break it be made to climb all the steps
we don’t break it we’ll be made to climb all the steps.
22
Ant on the floor the small ant on the kitchen floor
the small ant anticipates by sound or shadow.
23
Light turns out in the kitchen when somebody pulls on the string
those gathered not able to anticipate the danger.
24
If we had only stayed in the school of the prophets
in the school of the prophets who catch thoughts from words.
25
Ant on the floor the small ant on the kitchen floor
those gathered not able to anticipate the danger.
26
Those who are gathered are fondled and taken by the hand
taken by the hand and made to climb all the steps.
27
Perfectly built fort bound to make the community unhappy
bound to make those in the community unhappy.
28
What really kills me is standing in the need of prayer
I’m standing in the need of jokes that come back.
29
Standing in the need of prayer in a perfectly built fort
bound to make you unhappy bound to make me unhappy.
30
Not broken the habit of prayer not been broken
those who are gathered better learn how to cure their wounds.
