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The Venturesomeness of Sedition

04/28/2026 14:58h
The unrestricted sun had split the day in two, and now we went on the edge of the afternoon like a tableau of bent figures made of faded blue duck. We went like a wandering and stinking, sweating brotherhood, pull by pull between the leafy cotton plants, with the pathetic appearance of arriving at the end of the furrow. But we always arrived in a rush to get there, and the sole logic was we had to move over to the next furrow, and no one could stop the counterflow down it. And I, the dusty kid left behind in the middle of the field, held prisoner in my own slow shadow, was right in not giving in to the absurd pace of tradition. So my days burned up in that captive state of childhood. Then, yes, it was then the venturesomeness of sedition overtook me. Saturdays, after noon, the body finally lying down in the waves of the aluminum bathtub. And in the liberating rite of the water, I could shed the grime and contemplate the muddy waters of time. So it was, with the ablution of the weekly bath, I exiled myself each time from what I was.